NBIMS Review - Chapter 5.3.2 Information Exchange Database - Comments

c5.3.2/p113/l6 - Format

Bob Huston — Tue, 22 May 2007 00:02:23 -0400

Delete line 6.

c5.3.2/p113/l2 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Tue, 22 May 2007 00:01:51 -0400

Move the word "and" to the end of the line to precede the last item listed "workflows" on line 3.

c5.3.2/p112/l44 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 23:58:49 -0400

Who's website is referred to, NBIMS, CSI or IAI?

c5.3.2/p112/l42 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 23:48:57 -0400

Add the word "information" before the word "exchange".

c5.3.2/p112/l4 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 23:34:49 -0400

Suggest changing "...building blocks of which..." to "...building blocks from which...".

c5.3.2/p111/l38 and 39 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 23:15:50 -0400

Suggest rewording line 28 to read (bold text and punctuation added):

"The issue of industry re-engineering is difficult, and many have thought impossible, to impact at this level."

On line 29 replace "however" with "However, ".

c5.3.2/p111/l24 - 27 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 22:57:38 -0400

Incomplete sentence starting with prepositional phrase on line 24 requires rewording:

"As members of the Architect, .......... communities and related stakeholders identify the types of information exchanges in which they are interested, the gaps between the information exchange standards currently in the NBIMS and those that need to be developed will be identified."

c5.3.2/p110/l41 - Editorial

Bob Huston — Mon, 21 May 2007 22:22:23 -0400

Add footnote 26 for NIST report or add link under page 113, line 11.

Chapter 5.3.2 Information Exchange Database

webmaster — Mon, 12 Mar 2007 15:42:11 -0400

Chapter 5.3.2 Information Exchange Database