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c2.3/p35/l29 - Editorial

Consider at end of line, ".....certain capabilities to reach maturity." vs. ".....certain capabilities to be matured."

c2.3/p36/l15 - Editorial

Recommend at end of line. "....to achieve similar...." vs. " to achieve the same....".

c2.3/p36/l27 & 28 - Editorial

Suggest rewording, starting at the end of line 27:  "...not been able to identify the specific sources of those dollars....". (added words in bold for emphasis)

c2.3/p38/l27 - Editorial

Is the intent to say that some vendors see incorporation of IFC into products at various speeds as a potential way to lose market share?  In general wouldn't incorporation of open standard IFC into products maintain or increase market share?

Or is the intent to say the some vendors not incorporating IFC into their products see that they will lose market share, because their competitors are incorporating IFC into their products?

Can this be reworded for better clarity?

c2.3/p38/l31 - Format

Suggest reducing indent on secondary bullet items on lines 31 through 34.

c2.3/p40/l22 - Editorial

Delete the word "and" between "Uniformat," and "IFC Entities definitions," and add the word "and" immediately before the word "workflows".

c2.3/p40/l25 - Editorial

Move the word "designers" to the beginning of the line so it reads:  "designers, specifiers, contractors and owners."

c2.3/p40/l36 - Editorial

Athe end of the line delete "will come out" and substitute "will be issued".

c2.3/p43/l36 - Format

Bullet item symbols from line 36 through the end of page 44 are smaller than those used elsewhere in this chapter and the documenta as a whole.

c2.3/p35/l27 - Editorial

The user is encouraged to read the rest of the document first and in fact the rest of the document is prerequisite to understanding much of this chapter. Shouldn't this chapter be placed at the end of the document?

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