Chapter 3.4 Information Assurance
Chapter 3.4 Information Assurance
c3.4/p65/l32 - Editorial
Grammar in sentence is awkward. Suggestion for rewording: " Associated with the data should be such facts as who created the data, how, why and when they created it, and how good the data is."
c3.4/p66/l2 - Typo
Near the end of the line change
"Information Assurance important to you." to
"Information Assurance is important to you.".
c3.4/p66/l17-18 - Typo
Delete the comma between the words "Council" and "charter" and insert a comma between the words "member" and "the".
c3.4/p68/l25 - Editorial
Suggest "used to develop" vs. "translated into".
c3.4/p68/l29-30 - Editorial
Suggest rewording last part of sentence to read:
"...if the information is private, public, or a combination of both, and which information falls into which category."
c3.4/p69/l38-40 - Editorial
The verb tense of this bullet item does not match that of the others. Suggest the following wording:
"Information Assurance Vulnerability Actions. Systems Administrators/network administrators install patches to close documented vulnerabilities in the information technology infrastructure and report compliance."
c3.4/p71/l5-6 - Editorial
Bullet items in lines 5 and 6 use third person passive voice verb tense "be initiated" and "be implemented", which is not grammatically consitent with items on lines 4 and 7. Recommend the following wording for lines 5 and 6 to provide consistency:
"Initiation of encryption-at-rest measures,"
"Implementation of encryption-during-transmision, and"
c3.4/p71/l22 - Editorial
Suggest rewording the sentence as follows (revised and added words in bold for emphasis):
"The data about who entered the information into the BIM is in fact metadata about the information."
c4.1/p73-78 - Typo
Comment withdrawn and moved to correct chapter.
c4.1/p73/l8 - Typo
Comment withdrawn and moved to correct chapter.
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c3.4/p65/l Chapter heading - Format
Font type on Chapter 3.4 heading on eacy page does not match font for chapter headings in chapters 1.1 through 3.1, 3.34.1, and following.