Chapter 3.4 Information Assurance

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c3.4/p65/l Chapter heading - Format

Font type on Chapter 3.4 heading on eacy page does not match font for chapter headings in chapters 1.1 through 3.1, 3.34.1, and following.

c3.4/p65/l32 - Editorial

Grammar in sentence is awkward.  Suggestion for rewording:  " Associated with the data should be such facts as who created the data, how, why and when they created it, and how good the data is."

c3.4/p66/l2 - Typo

Near the end of the line change

"Information Assurance important to you." to

"Information Assurance is important to you.".

c3.4/p66/l17-18 - Typo

Delete the comma between the words "Council" and "charter" and insert a comma between the words "member" and "the".

c3.4/p68/l25 - Editorial

Suggest "used to develop" vs. "translated into".

c3.4/p68/l29-30 - Editorial

Suggest rewording last part of sentence to read:

"...if the information is private, public, or a combination of both, and which information falls into which category."

c3.4/p69/l38-40 - Editorial

The verb tense of this bullet item does not match that of the others.  Suggest the following wording:

"Information Assurance Vulnerability Actions.  Systems Administrators/network administrators install patches to close documented vulnerabilities in the information technology infrastructure and report compliance."

c3.4/p71/l5-6 - Editorial

Bullet items in lines 5 and 6 use third person passive voice verb tense "be initiated" and "be implemented", which is not grammatically consitent with items on lines 4 and 7.  Recommend the following wording for lines 5 and 6 to provide consistency:

"Initiation of encryption-at-rest measures,"

"Implementation of encryption-during-transmision, and"

c3.4/p71/l22 - Editorial

Suggest rewording the sentence as follows (revised and added words in bold for emphasis):

"The data about who entered the information into the BIM is in fact metadata about the information."

c4.1/p73-78 - Typo

Comment withdrawn and moved to correct chapter.

c4.1/p73/l8 - Typo

Comment withdrawn and moved to correct chapter.

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