Add footnote 26 for NIST report or add link under page 113, line 11.

Incomplete sentence starting with prepositional phrase on line 24 requires rewording:

"As members of the Architect, .......... communities and related stakeholders identify the types of information exchanges in which they are interested, the gaps between the information exchange standards currently in the NBIMS and those that need to be developed will be identified."

Suggest rewording line 28 to read (bold text and punctuation added):

"The issue of industry re-engineering is difficult, and many have thought impossible, to impact at this level."

On line 29 replace "however" with "However, ".

Suggest changing "...building blocks of which..." to "...building blocks from which...".

Add the word "information" before the word "exchange".

Who's website is referred to, NBIMS, CSI or IAI?

Move the word "and" to the end of the line to precede the last item listed "workflows" on line 3.

Delete line 6.